Breathe
and this is not blindness
Fear's teeth fail bluntly
A colliquoy of glances
And the shadows wait
Breathe
and the horizon brightens
The flowers gaze, intoxicated
Wild horse and my fathers
Are irrelevant whispers now
Breathe
and the sky is mine
Every shade and hue reflecting
Back the pieces of my heart
Smile like Springtime and reality
and this is not blindness
Fear's teeth fail bluntly
A colliquoy of glances
And the shadows wait
Breathe
and the horizon brightens
The flowers gaze, intoxicated
Wild horse and my fathers
Are irrelevant whispers now
Breathe
and the sky is mine
Every shade and hue reflecting
Back the pieces of my heart
Smile like Springtime and reality
posted by Feanor at 1:21 PM
1 Comments:
please dont hate me when i say that this is the best poem that youve ever written. i so mean that. ohmygoodness evan. sheer brilliance here. dont change one word.
you have some amazing work here, my man. i cant even lie, i randomly burst out crying as i read through this page. you have such a beautiful skill shown all over this one page. dont forget that.
keep writing. i know you do it for yourself, but it helps others, too. youre so so good at it, and its so beautiful to read.
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